Monday, October 8, 2012

Incarnations of Burned Children: Critique 5


Incarnations of Burned Children
     -David Foster Wallace

This short tale by David Foster Wallace instantly throws the reader into a state of panicked chaos, not knowing why this child is screaming but we instantly feel the need to help this child, much like “The Daddy.” Wallace writes this story with very little punctuation, no paragraph structure, nothing that would make an English teacher happy. Despite it all, it is a wonderful work of writing that creates panic in the reader, we feel what the parents of the child feel because Wallace never really let's us catch our breath while reading. At times we are lost in the confusion, not certain what is going on, but at all times we are desperate, this child is in pain and we want more than anything else to help quell this child's tears.
Wallace creates the scene as if intended for a blind man, and the script is being read to him as the events unfold. Details are missed, there is too much going on to bother with literary flare, we are given just enough to visualize the scene. Its straight and to the point.The point however, is somewhat ambiguous in the end. It sounds as though the baby lives, “his body extends” and he grows up to become another person living out his life, waking, going to work, then sleeping only to repeat his day. The events of the story far from his mind. The readers however, as well as the Daddy and Mother, can recall that while young, he faced something terrible. His parent's will never forget, but that day is far from his mind.

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